The other day I was stumped on the road to the end of my work in progress, so I phoned a friend (yes like that game show where you get to call for help) to discuss where I was in my story and where I could go from there.
I often get stumped at the same place: three quarters of the way through, where I’m juggling all the threads at the same time. I fret and walk around the house, basically talking to myself. Sometimes the talk gets dark, dreary and repetitive and I become afraid I’ll never find my way to the end.
Sooner or later, I realize I need to talk it out.
My friend and I chatted as I paced the house, and realized writing a book is like that famous yellow brick road. I always end up at that spot where the sign reads, “I’d go back if I were you.”
The forest is haunted, creepy as all get out and there’s a fraidy cat inside who wants to turn tail and run. Except there’s no point going back, we know what’s on the road behind us and none of the things back there will take us where we want to go: home! We must forge ahead in spite of the dreariness of the road.:-O
On the yellow brick road the scarecrow gets the stuffing torn out of him. He needs his friends to collect all the straw and put him back together.
With writing, there’s a point in every story where all the threads you exposed at the beginning are floating free. Sooner or later, those threads need to be woven into the fabric of the story.
I need to pick up all those threads, one at a time and tie up each one. The lightest thread first, then a heavier one, then the next and the next until everything is resolved and we’re where we want to be: at a happy ending, or, home.
Now, if I could just find a way to avoid all the fretting and pacing and realize I’m headed for that haunted forest *before* I get there, I could avoid the battle with the flying monkeys. (That’s a whole other blog.):-[
I’ve recently updated my website with pictures and news. I can hardly wait to share my Blaze cover! The artwork for Possessing Morgan has begun, so I’ll show it off just as soon as I can.
One of the updates I did was to change the release date on Possessing Morgan to March 2010. I’ve already heard from a reviewer that she’s waiting anxiously for my first Blaze, so I’m excited to get feedback from people who love the line. Blaze readers rock!
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Hello Bonnie, I love the analogy you use here. It is definitely a different way of looking at the process. I could actually imagine the threads of a story being like the straw from the scarecrow. Maybe, I will better able to appreciate it more when I am at that point.
Peace and love,
Paula R.
Paula, I’m glad the analogy helped. I often notice they help me, too.
Best of luck when you need to tie your threads. I don’t know why I’m always overwhelmed at that point. I’ve been there many times. But that’s the process for me I guess.
Good thing we’ve got “phone a friend”.
Bonnie
Yeah…phone a friend works…I just hope that by the time I am there, I have some friends that could be on that list.
Peace and love,
Paula R.
I’m glad you tweeted that you were posting here today. I wouldn’t have gotten here until tonight!
Threads, threads, threads…sometimes they all weave together and then others, I feel like I’m done with my project but I keep finding the nith-nith of a thread I have to pick up off the floor and then I wonder where it came from and did I miss anything. Rather like taking your computer apart and hoping you don’t end up with something left over when you’re done
Nice to have that phone-a-friend so you don’t end up with all the nith-nith left over wondering ‘now what?’ Nice too that you’re such a good writer and can work past that.
And I can’t wait for the new cover. You have wonderful covers!
Hey, Bonnie–
I love the analogy of the yellow brick road–and that we often need to link arms and make our way down that road together. Some days you’re the one leaking straw and on others, it’s me.
So as your phone-a-friend, just know I’m so glad to know that you’re on the other end of the line when those damn monkeys are after me. :-O
alexis
I can’t wait for the release of your Blaze debut. Congrats.
Damn monkeys, is right Alexis! Some days, it’s such a relief to hear your voice…even if you are being chased through the haunted forest.
I really, really need to buy myself some super duper deluxe edition of that movie.
And NM, if you find a thread…follow it backward to where you started it. Then you can snip it off if you need to. Not all of them belong!
Bonnie
I finally gave twitter a shot, I’m glad I did it’s easy to see what friends are up to and get news fast. Plus you can see where author’s are blogging and such. It’s nice.
Can’t wait for your blaze to come out!
Lucky you, Nicole, for mentioning Twitter you get to win a signed book.
Please email me at bonnie@bonnieedwards.com and I’ll be in touch! (Y)
Thanks for stopping by.
Bonnie
Sweet! Thanks for picking me! Sent you an email.
I look forward to reading the flying monkeys post.
I’m going to follow you on Twitter. I’m “AshleyLadd” on Twitter. I’m a Twitter addict.
I brainstorm with my critique partners a lot. I’m in dire need of another session myself.
I’ll see you on Twitter! (@)